Oh I really like this one. You have captured such a powerful thought in such few words. I tend towards a love a adjectives and adverbs.I deeply identify with this one. David, May 20, 2011
If snow had never settled upon that heap of rubble, and its white blanket never anesthetized the pain, if rain were pure and no pollution'd ever happened, then that first time would probably have to come again your friend, D. , May 22,2011
Here, a spring snow falls and covers the rubble.
Oh I really like this one. You have captured such a powerful thought in such few words. I tend towards a love a adjectives and adverbs.
ReplyDeleteI deeply identify with this one.
David, May 20, 2011
If snow had never settled upon that heap of rubble,
ReplyDeleteand its white blanket never anesthetized the pain,
if rain were pure and no pollution'd ever happened,
then that first time would probably have to come again
your friend,
D. , May 22,2011