Tuesday, June 7, 2011

Caustic March

Here, a spring snow falls and covers the rubble.
It's probably the frozen version of acid rain
but it looks innocuous enough.
Certainly wouldn't be the first time
that I've been fooled by such stuff.


  1. Oh I really like this one. You have captured such a powerful thought in such few words. I tend towards a love a adjectives and adverbs.

    I deeply identify with this one.

    David, May 20, 2011

  2. If snow had never settled upon that heap of rubble,

    and its white blanket never anesthetized the pain,

    if rain were pure and no pollution'd ever happened,

    then that first time would probably have to come again

    your friend,

    D. , May 22,2011